Bilkul, main aapke liye ek original dark, melancholic aur poetic rap song create karta hoon, aapke diye hue vibe ke anuroop.Title: सन्नाटे का शोर (Sannate Ka Shor)[Intro](Music:A slow, haunting piano melody with a deep 808 bass kick. Sound of a lighter flicking and a slow exhale)Yeh zindagi...yeh kaisi zindagi?Sirf ek dard...ek khaali pan...[Verse 1]Ye subah ki pehli kirne ka dhuaan hoon main,Ek bemaani si zindagi ka nishaan hoon main.Har ek saans mein ek zakhm chhupa ke rakha hai,Dil ke andar jo aag hai,use bujha ke rakha hai.Log kehte hain muskurao,toh muskura deta hoon,Andar se toot chuka hoon,par jhuta sapna dikha deta hoon.Yeh shehar ek qaid-khaana,hawaon mein hai zehr,Kho gaye hain raaste,har mod pe hai dera.[Hook]Zindagi kategi isi dhuen ke saaye mein,Ek adhoori kahani,ek be-sura gaaye mein.Na koi manzil hai,na koi hai sahara,Bas doobta ja raha hoon,iss andhere ke paara.Zindagi kategi...[Verse 2]Sharaab ke glass mein duboya hai gham ko,Har ek peg ne diya hai ek naya dard mujhko.Na umeed ki kiran,na koi hai aas,Sirf ek laash hoon,jo karti hai intezaar.Maut se nahin darta,is jeene se darta hoon,Har pal ek jehennum,har pal ek afat jhelta hoon.Yeh naach ajeeb sa,yeh zindagi ka tamasha,Ek khoon-e-jigar hai,jo behta hai har khwaab se.[Hook]Zindagi kategi isi dhuen ke saaye mein,Ek adhoori kahani,ek be-sura gaaye mein.Na koi manzil hai,na koi hai sahara,Bas doobta ja raha hoon,iss andhere ke paara.Zindagi kategi...[Bridge](A slow,spoken word section with the music almost fading)Kya tum sunoge meri khamoshi ki aawaaz?Jism hai zinda,magar ruh andhi gufaon mein gum.Har cigarette ek antim ichha hai jo jal jaati hai,Har saans ek sawal hai...jiska koi jawab nahi.Koi nahi samjhega...yeh dard mera khaas hai,Main khud se hi haar chuka hoon,yeh jeet kaun sa khazana hai?[Verse 3]Toote hue sheeshe jaise bikhre hain khayal mere,Dhunde hain jawaab main,magar har jawaab se dare.Waqt ki lakeeren hain gehri,aankhon mein andhera ghana,Yeh zindagi na lagaav,yeh to ek be-maani fana.Main mitti ka khilona,jo kismat ne toda hai,Aansu bhi sookh gaye,ab rota bhi nahi koi.Bas ek sannata hai,jo poochhta hai har sawal,"Kyun?"..."Kyun?"... "Kyun?"[Outro](Music fades out slowly with the haunting piano and the sound of rain)Bas...yunhi...Dhuaan ban kar uda jaunga...Kisi ki yaadon mein nahi,kisi ke khwaabon mein nahi...Bas ek dhuaan...jo hawa mein mil jaayega...Zindagi...ek dhundh... hai......aur main...usi mein kho gaya.---Note: Yeh rap ek kala ka roop hai, jo gehraaiyon aur dard ko darshata hai. Yeh aapki feeling ko ek naya aakaar deta hai. Agar aapko lagta hai ki aap in bhavnaon se abhaar mehsoos kar rahe hain, toh kisi vishwaspatra ya counsellor se baat karna sarvottam vikalp hai. Kala ek sundar saadhan hai, par zindagi usse kahi adhik keemti hai.
AKSHYOf course, bhai. Yeh raha aapke ussi dark, melancholic vibe par based ek full rap song. Song structure hai: Intro, Hook, Verse 1, Hook, Verse 2, Bridge, Hook, Outro.
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(Intro)
(A slow,haunting piano loop. The sound of a lighter flicking, a deep inhale and a slow exhale of cigarette smoke. A deep, echoing voice begins...)
Yeah...
Zindagi...
Yeh dhuaan... yeh nasha... yeh khel...
Sunta hai koi?
(Hook)
Yeh zindagi bemaani si,ek sazaa hai khaali-si,
Har subah utho toh lagta hai jeet ka koi saathi nahi.
Dhuein mein kho jate hain sabhi sawal ke jawaab,
Maut se bhi gehri hai yeh andheri khaai.
(Verse 1)
Mere andar ek shahar hai,ujda hua, veeran,
Jahan khwahishen dafan hain,koi matam kare azaan.
Chehre pe muskurahat,andar toofan ka aalam,
Har din ek naya zakhm,har raat uska hisaab.
Sharaab ke pyaale mein doobta hua aasmaan,
Sulagti hui cigarette,yeh meri aakhiri nishaan.
Doston ke darmiyaan bhi ek ajeeb tanhai hai,
Khaalipan ka libaas pehena,yeh duniya ki rasm hai.
Log kehte hain"chhod de nasha," par kya jaane woh dard,
Ki nasha nahi,dard ka nasha hai, yeh hai asli marz.
(Hook)
Yeh zindagi bemaani si,ek sazaa hai khaali-si,
Har subah utho toh lagta hai jeet ka koi saathi nahi.
Dhuein mein kho jate hain sabhi sawal ke jawaab,
Maut se bhi gehri hai yeh andheri khaai.
(Verse 2)
Maa ne kaha tha"beta kuch toh bada kar ke dikhana,"
Par maine toh apne aap ko hi haar te dekh liya.
Wo sapne the kitne rangeen,ab woh hai faike,
Jeeneki wajah dhoondhti nazar,har kona hai andhera.
Shehar ki is bhag-daud mein,main khud se hi hara hoon,
Aaina dekh loon toh lagta hai koi aur saamne hai.
Yeh sadkon ka kachra,yeh hawaon mein zehar,
Dil ke andar ghis gayi hai ek ajeeb si lakeer.
Maut se na darr lagta,is zindagi se darrta hoon main,
Ki maut ek pal ki hai,yeh zindagi har pal ki hai.
(Bridge)
(Beat slows down even more,almost to a whisper)
Kyun?
Kyun jeena itna mushkil hai?
Kyun har saans mein ek dard sama hai?
Kahan?
Kahan kho gaya woh bachpan ka main?
Jo sapne dekhta tha,jo haste haste sota tha...
Ab toh neend bhi ek ajeeb sa khwaab dikhati hai,
Aur khwaabon mein bhi wahi andhera dikhta hai...
(Hook)
(Beat drops back in,with more intensity and a feeling of desperation)
Yeh zindagi bemaani si,ek sazaa hai khaali-si,
Har subah utho toh lagta hai jeet ka koi saathi nahi.
Dhuein mein kho jate hain sabhi sawal ke jawaab,
Maut se bhi gehri hai yeh andheri khaai.
(Outro)
(Sound of a glass being set down heavily.A slow, final exhale. The piano loop fades out.)
Bas...
Yahi kahani hai meri...
Ek afeemi ki diary ka aakhri page...
Dhuaan... ban kar... khatam...
Shanti...
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Note on the Vibe: Ye rap ek aise insaan ki kahaani hai jo andar se toot chuka hai, jo duniya ke saamne mask laga kar chalta hai lekin andar se khaali, dukhi aur tanha hai. Beats heavy bass wali nahi, balki slow, atmospheric aur haunting honi chahiye, taaki lyrics ka poora asar ho.
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